Steps laid out short, placed at precise angles,
stretch careful measured footsteps to the dock -
rare dusks do claim occasions he stumbled,
well practiced his art of nocturnal walk.
Come rain or sunshine, grass with steps debase
at same inclines on clock hands everyday.
My quaintest friend with acuity effaced
transmutes my doubts in mystifying ways.
Black glasses shifting gray history aside,
expert hands grope and learn unknown landscape -
a cane employed to function as a guide
gains impression that objects have a shape,
that shapes exist and own its dimension,
that fragile buds meet spring and burgeon.
1 comment:
Dear Sanjit Bhattacharjee,
Your sonnet is beautiful. You have chosen your vocabulary meticulously and the imagery is highly evocative. Only the word "debase" is a bit tricky in connotation.
The start of the sestet -
"Black glasses shifting gray history aside"
- takes the poem from the individual level to the universal level. The last line leaves the reader pondering how well the poem's title is justified.
Best wishes and have a happy new year.
Regards,
Amit Shankar Saha
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